My tutor indicated that there is an issue of clarity on my work.
She advised that i can draw an experiment table or show the rat on a target screen on the image to present a scene that an robotic flea using for controlling mice is in process. The second picture is much more matching to my concept.
This time she suggested me to look at Arthur Rackham's work for inspiration and searching artworks of watercolour& ink.
Arthur Rackham's artwork
This two images below is supposed to be the final piece without colour. I plan to combine them together with photoshop at the end. The image shows that the robotic flea is the reason of Black Death. It controls rats to attack human being. The second image is supposed to be the background of the first image. According to the page size, i am not be able to draw it in one piece.
As i am going to work on the steampunk robotic conspiracy. I was searching some examples about steampunk:
Artist:KERBY ROSANES
http://kerbyrosanes.com/post/75889175962/time-guardian-commissioned-work-for-zero-square
Michael Parks
As we talked about the FADP in the meeting. My tutor said that FADP does not mean that it has to be perspective. She presents Michael Parks' artwork for example.